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Ardra Neala
Ardra Neala

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SPOILER- rough cut of video opening

Hey I've been working entirely on the costume and scene for the carnival video, I don't think it'll be ready exactly at halloween but if I push hard, maybe. I'm only going to make small tweaks to this and if you could give me feedback let me know. I'll show you the second part when that's improved too. the eyes and the editing need work obviously but let me know if anything else looks too weird or fake. I'll probably try to touch up the paint on the clown entrance and maybe add a city scape in the back. If I can find time I will program the lights on the sign to flicker.

SPOILER- rough cut of video opening

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Here's hoping this will be as close to Halloween as possible!

Terry

this looks amazing!!

Aaron U

I agree with the others that its good now. I come from a world where if I ask for feedback someone tells me "Well could you make it 3 times more complicated?" Not by the end of the month....no. You said that you wanted to do some work on the eyes but I don't see it. So I'm guessing its something you imagined that we haven't yet. When there is time.......I get the impression its night so some stars in the background would be a plus over where you are. I also think that a couple random lights on the strings should be out. It would go along with the clown's level of upkeep if not all the lights are on.

I agree, it’s completely creepy already!!

Cheryl Meuser

Come on, it's fantastic already! Great camera-move by the way. Maybe you could add some motion-blur, when it moves in fast, but that level of detail is insane already - give yourself a break.Have fun with it, don't push, that's what we're coming back for.


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