Face Shopping Rough Draft
Added 2022-08-31 19:09:36 +0000 UTCThis is more roughly edited than the last one. I'm not a fan of how I lit myself here. Harsh, close, side lighting increases texture and not much light is getting into my eyes. There's some mic knocking too that I may or may not be able to remove. And I'll have to revisit grading later. I might add some pitched down inaudible whispering from my friend in the back. The end is supposed to become a bit intense with the shrunken head talking but haven't done it yet. I also linger a little too long on the left.
Comments
I really loved this video! Lots of tingles, great sound quality. It looks very good too, although the lighting is not perfect as you pointed out. Not a huge deal though.
2022-09-09 00:35:21 +0000 UTCThis was a particularly good one! It has somewhat similar vibes to the face touching one from a few months back, but with a slight dash of mortal peril. In terms of your concerns, I didn't have any complaints about the lighting personally, though I could sort of see what you meant about the light getting into your eyes when the angles lined up correctly. It does look a bit better, but personally I don't think it'd warrant a whole reshoot or anything. I think the whispering from the head would be a good addition, especially as you said, to build up the intensity at the end right before the little lighthearted bit as it finishes All in all, I liked it! Very good work, regardless of being a draft.
Smashterson
2022-09-01 02:49:14 +0000 UTCThe ending was the cherry on top. I've got my trash bag ready.
Red Wolfy
2022-08-31 23:19:41 +0000 UTCPerfect as always!! I think the inaudible whispers would definitely be complimentary too!
2022-08-31 22:26:38 +0000 UTCThis is enjoyable. I kept expecting more heart sinking feelings in the pit of my stomach. Like, I got the job? That was easy. And all there is in the dungeon is a couple of pokey sticks? Also, 20:48, did anyone else see a flash of judgemental eyes at the bottom of the screen? >,>
wattmill
2022-08-31 21:51:59 +0000 UTCGah! Even your drafts are Perfection!
Terry
2022-08-31 20:10:50 +0000 UTC
