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So here is the changed and mostly cleaned up and polished fourth double page.
I added extra panels to make the narrative work better and still keep what people liked in the previous draft. Hope it works.
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Easy Guitar Melodies
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Qshika
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RaliDali
なまほしちゃん
KIKIMETAL
Baker Arts
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l0afie
MyLittlePornoFriendshipWithBenefits
Tachumi
lisachanges
妄想具現化機関
Arcane Workshop
石の下
Icedrone
Beawesome Games
でらせるふ
aqua-drop-b
Ni-Dux
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morinetsu
DevVoxy
tamersworld
deathstalkerlives
fvmods
枡田研究室
Blake XYZ
Anoki
KakiPeanuts
yummymarie
leoZURC
GlazedBun