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Added 2025-08-25 08:22:46 +0000 UTCWhat are you wanting to see in the elden lord fic? Please comment
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The dire wolves...give Ned one too. Also I think we should get a announcement that Ranni is probably with child. Maybe Rennala makes a appearance (her height would probably blow their their minds). Hell maybe others like Jar Bairn (since he's definitely Jon's cousin 馃槈), Nephili Loux and Rodericka would fight in too.
DeAngelo Ellis
2025-08-30 01:55:50 +0000 UTCI'm still hoping to see the Dire wolves
Payton Wilson
2025-08-27 22:14:42 +0000 UTCDefinitely focus on more of Jon鈥檚 POV and also a little bit more context on his journey through the Lands Between.
VMA!23
2025-08-26 20:49:46 +0000 UTCMore time spent with Jon as the central character Early on Jon always played a major role but as the story has gone on it鈥檚 become more about other characters reacting to him or westeroses reaction to Jon which I鈥檓 fine with in short bursts But when we鈥檝e had several chapters where Jon doesn鈥檛 even appear then it becomes a problem We don鈥檛 even need to have very plot relevant chapters just Jon spending time with the cast is just fine but a lot of moments like that feel like they get skipped over in favour of seeing how dorne ir the river lands is reacting to Cersei and Jamie鈥檚 deaths when it鈥檚 really just not needed at all The focus of the story seems to be a bit everywhere lately so I feel like you should sort of being wbu thing back to Jon and the starks primarily Speaking of I really want to see Jon reveal he knows that Ned isn鈥檛 his father and that whole conversation is something I鈥檓 really looking forward to Seeing some more fragments of Jon鈥檚 journey in the lands between would be cool as well such as his first encounters with ranni and marika for instance A full talk between catelyn and Jon would be nice as well her guilt has been built up quiet a lot so I want to see a resolution to that maybe with Jon revealing he was never neds bastard to begin with Anyway I love this story it鈥檚 my favourite of your stories you write and I always look forward to new chapters but it could use some refocusing since it feels a bit all over the place right now
Aliata
2025-08-26 02:42:42 +0000 UTCSee other eldritch beings appearing to face Jon, because the humans here are to weak and may make the story less interesting later down the line.
Goxo
2025-08-25 21:48:46 +0000 UTCHopefully we don't see Jon get nerfed when he fights against mortal enemies
Erick Myrthil
2025-08-25 14:15:50 +0000 UTCMore Jon povs
Jackson Stott
2025-08-25 13:20:42 +0000 UTC
