A little action, a little hint at some intrigue. Let me know what you think.
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A distant rumble sounded off to his right, muffled by the trees, and Valla said, “The ship went do...
2023-05-07 12:01:14 +0000 UTC View PostA lot of conversation . . . Let me know what you all think.
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PS - attaching a PDF of the chapter. I'll try to do that from now on 'cause I know some of you hate to re...
2023-05-05 16:11:46 +0000 UTC View PostHey all! Hopefully, I didn't have a brain meltdown like last time. I think I got all the names right! let me know what you think and if you see anything wonky :)
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Vict...
2023-05-04 14:23:44 +0000 UTC View PostHere's your Wednesday delivery! Hope you enjoy :)
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Another boom, followed by the rending of metal above her head, forced Juliet to press herself to the concre...
2023-05-03 11:47:41 +0000 UTC View PostHere's your Victor of Tucson delivery! Hope you enjoy~
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Victor stood on the prow of the Wind Dancer and watched the mountain slopes drift by beneath the ship. They’d j...
2023-05-02 18:16:38 +0000 UTC View PostWelcome to New Atlas. Let me know what you think :)
-Plum
PS - I'm sorry if you're getting redundant notifications. I'm doing everything I can to keep from alerting tier-3...
2023-05-01 14:29:13 +0000 UTC View PostHere's your delivery! Have a relaxing Sunday :)
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“What was the point of that display?” ap’Gravin muttered, perhaps trying to cling to some semblance of his earlier bluster....
2023-04-30 11:24:44 +0000 UTC View PostPlease Enjoy and let me know what you think :)
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“Pizza and beer,” Juliet sighed, sitting back and rubbing her stomach. “Can’t go wrong.”
Aya laughed and held up h...
2023-04-28 18:10:56 +0000 UTC View PostHi, everyone! I've had a lot of thought about this scene and the ones leading up to it, and I've decided to make some changes. Here are the details of what I altered in 5.7 I'm just posting what I changed - if you want to see them in c...
2023-04-27 16:52:22 +0000 UTC View PostHope you enjoy the chapter! Some background, some foreshadowing . . . let me know if something doesn't make sense :)
-Plum
Juliet stood back by the colossal winch and watch...
2023-04-26 16:26:29 +0000 UTC View PostI had a goal for this chapter, but I'm not sure I got it where I wanted. I'd love to hear your feedback; maybe my brain is just tired.
Thanks,
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2023-04-25 16:40:56 +0000 UTC View PostLet me know what you think. Hope you're all having a great week :)
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“This doesn’t look bad,” Shiro said, scooping the quickly dissolving foam, now a slippery gel, away from...
2023-04-24 14:46:11 +0000 UTC View PostA little more insight into the Quinametzin. Hope you enjoy!
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“Before you drink that,” Valla said, touching her fingers to the silver flask as though to keep him fr...
2023-04-23 12:02:03 +0000 UTC View PostOkay, please let me know if something doesn't make sense :) I hope you enjoy the ride!
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Juliet’s exit from her improvised hiding spot was almost disastrous; she was so hyped up...
2023-04-21 16:50:27 +0000 UTC View PostHope you enjoy! Have a nice day :)
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Victor woke the following morning feeling very rested and relaxed. He stretched, unwinding the soft, white sheet from his torso; he...
2023-04-20 18:03:42 +0000 UTC View PostHappy to hear your feedback :)
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“Did you file the claim?” Shiro asked through crew comms, his words chasing Alice’s announcement almost immediately.
“Of course. We...
2023-04-19 16:42:22 +0000 UTC View PostI hope you enjoy the chapter. Still setting the stage a bit :)
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“Holy shit,” Victor muttered, swiping away the System message. “I gained two levels for learning ...
2023-04-18 16:58:27 +0000 UTC View PostLove to hear your feedback!
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When Juliet got to the cargo bay, she found Shiro moving big spools of cabling into position by an enormous winch mounted near the rear wall. The spo...
2023-04-17 14:53:22 +0000 UTC View PostEnjoy! Happy Sunday! This procrastinator is going to try to tackle taxes :( :( :(
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Not long after he’d begun working with Tes’s pattern, Victor was dimly aware tha...
2023-04-16 13:35:14 +0000 UTC View PostGood morning :)
Lots of space and ship talk here - let me know if something doesn't make sense. If it sounds good, I'd love to hear that, as well. Hope you enjoy!
-Plum 2023-04-14 11:46:39 +0000 UTC View Post
Thanks for all the feedback and ideas after Chapter 1! I've sort of settled on an idea, and I think you'll be able to connect most of the dots after this chapter. I hope it makes sense and that you are enjoying things. Some concern was...
2023-04-13 17:25:24 +0000 UTC View PostKind of an interlude chapter here. Hope this volume is keeping you all interested enough; I know it's been a bit light on the action.
-Plum
“Woah,” Juliet said as she s...
2023-04-12 14:53:03 +0000 UTC View PostSPOILER ALERT: If you haven't read book 3 of FWFW and you intend to, maybe wait on reading this VOT book. Sorry if this warning came too late for anyone!
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For the first time, as he passed...
2023-04-11 15:05:42 +0000 UTC View PostReally loving all the feedback here and in Discord. Thank you all! As you might have surmised from my post on Saturday, I've had to do a few revisions about ship travel times. It wasn't that bad, thank goodness!
1. I...
2023-04-10 15:06:37 +0000 UTC View PostRecently a very helpful reader pointed out that my calculations seemed wonky when it came to ship travel times. I won't spoil for those of you who haven't read that far, but let's just say I might need to do some revising! My friend who initially ...
2023-04-08 11:32:08 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Please enjoy the chapter and let me know what you think.
-Plum
Juliet’s routine on the Kaminari Kowashi for the next few days of their journey became some of the best times of ...
2023-04-07 10:01:00 +0000 UTC View PostEnjoy! If you read this earlier, I had to change the travel times a bit.
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On the second day of transit, Bennet asked Juliet to help him and Aya uncrate and set up a bunch of gym ...
2023-04-05 09:10:00 +0000 UTC View PostEnjoy!
“Can you tell me more about Ghoul? Why do you think she came to mind when I asked you about your feelings of distrust and nervousness and why you haven’t formed close relationships with others?” The vir...
2023-04-05 09:09:59 +0000 UTC View PostPlease share your thoughts!
Juliet sat on the edge of her bunk—more of a gel-lined lounge chair than a bed—and looked around the quarters Alice had assigned to her. There was a faded poster on the gra...
2023-04-05 09:08:59 +0000 UTC View PostLet me know what you think!
-Plum
“Bennet, I’ll tie you to the reactor next time we’re in port,” Shiro groaned.
“Well, if you’re going to threaten me, pick something...
2023-04-05 09:08:00 +0000 UTC View Post