Gimme characters for September's poll

Warming up: every character you want give in the comments (you can do multiple but I'll pick the one I know or the one tha...

Warming up: every character you want give in the comments (you can do multiple but I'll pick the one I know or the one tha...
BUT... I decided to go fully monochrome for the comic, after all this time thinking, this comic to look more as a manga it would benefit a lot on the development of the story and the speed of the releases, I'm totally against quantity over quality...
2025-08-29 14:30:48 +0000 UTC View PostPoll winner of August
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Warming up: every character you want give in the comments (you can do multiple but I'll pick the one I know or the one that fits ...
After reading all of the comments I could gather the mayor issue of the ending of Rock Bottom.
What I lacked was the very development of the twist from the sexual drive of the story to the heavy subjects and the emotions Rio felt over the time ...
One of the things I would love is to get honest criticism of the writing I'm trying to develop in my stories, by that I mean, speaking with knowledge of the subject someone is talking about, or just understand some of writing in general.
The End.
This was a cool experience, I wasn't expecting this story that started as a "mini" comic would develop this much over time.
I should work on the cover of RB soon!