The Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Author's Notes
I should have divided that final act into two.
2023-10-16 21:10:54 +0000 UTC View Post
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The Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Epilogue
30th Day, Lower Fire Month, 1 CE
Alright, so…yeah, no, I got nothing.
Liam twirled an empty potion vial between his fingers as he watched a swarm of fiery citizens chase a group of screaming ar...
2023-10-14 23:10:15 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 18
Looks like the coast is clear…
When the column of armsmen marched into the city, Neia went into hiding, thinking that they had been sent after her. The column went right through without stopping, however, and she had later learned...
2023-10-13 01:08:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 17
“What the hell happened here?” Remedios asked.
“Don’t ask,” Gustav answered.
Hands on her hips, Remedios scanned the cordon of royal guardsmen set up just inside the palace gate. No longer adorned in their ceremonial...
2023-10-11 03:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 16
“I wonder what that blithering fool has prepared for us today.”
“Prepared?” Antonio Cohen snorted, “I doubt anything he brings up will have any semblance of preparation. At best, it’ll be another ‘idea’ with little or no thou...
2023-10-09 05:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 15
“How does it look?”
“You know, there’s only so much you can do with a strip of cloth.”
“I know, but I still want to make it look as good as possible.”
Since most people seemed to associate her with her mask, Neia fi...
2023-10-07 07:09:46 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 14
What in the name of the Sorcerer King is the Sorcerer King’s wisdom?
Liam frowned at the small gathering in the secluded courtyard below him. Over the past few days, stirrings of a different sort were manifesting in Hoburns, chara...
2023-10-05 09:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 13
“This can’t be right…”
It was a trick. It had to be. Yet, after spending hours walking around, Neia couldn’t figure out what the trick was.
Hoburns’ western quarter may as well have been a different world compared ...
2023-10-03 11:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 12
“You should have taken Orlando up on his offer.”
“Are you crazy?” Neia shot Saye a look, “Why would I want to work in…a…a…brothel?”
“It’s not just a brothel,” Saye told her. “All of the peopl...
2023-10-01 11:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 11
“Ow!”
Neia Baraja’s head snapped back after a jounce of the carriage smacked her head against the edge of the cabin’s overhead stowage. She held back her tears as she rubbed her forehead.
“I don’t get it,” she complained....
2023-09-27 15:08:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 10
“That fool. That absolute fool!”
A man’s enraged voice drifted out from the window beneath Liam’s feet. In the evening following the emergency session of Hoburns’ Royal Court, similar sentiments were expressed across the P...
2023-09-25 18:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 9
“We’ve got trouble.”
Remedios sat up in her bed, stretching her arms over her head with a yawn. She looked around, sleepy-eyed, eventually spotting Liam in a corner of her bedroom.
“What sort of trouble?” She twisted slightly...
2023-09-23 19:08:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 8
22nd Day, Lower Fire Month, 1 CE
Saye stared up at the Shadow Demon in the ceiling. The Shadow Demon stared back at her. They weren’t in a place where they could chat, so she could only stew quietl...
2023-09-21 21:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 7
12th Day, Lower Fire Month, 1 CE
Sierra Norte was the rather plain name for the mountain range that ran along the northern coast of the Holy Kingdom. According to Neia’s father, it was part of the ...
2023-09-19 23:13:58 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 6
In the market of Ferrero, their most recent conquest east of Lloyds, Neia Baraja watched a crowd of hungry townsfolk line up for soup distributed by the Corps.
No, more than hungry, they’ve had their spirits squashed.
Taking...
2023-09-18 01:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 5
“Are you sure this is alright? Saye asked.
“It’s the best way,” Commander Lobo replied.
“But it’s like you’re pirates…”
“Hmph, you’re just being naive again, girl. Well, I won’t blame you for that...
2023-09-16 05:10:51 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 4
Uwah, they’re so mad…
A half circle of scions faced Neia Baraja in the Corps’ camp outside of Lloyds. Her wavering gaze kept going between them as she tried to figure out how to reply to their anger. They were all dressed for ...
2023-09-15 05:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 3
“What does it mean when a girl bites you?”
Marim, Diogo, and Ricardo stared silently at Liam for several seconds.
“You talking about Nat?” Marim asked.
“Maybe…”
“Let’s see it,” Ricardo said.
“No....
2023-09-12 07:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 2
Natalia Abarca sniffed the suit of leather armour for the fifth time that night.
This is Kalinsha Soap, right?
She had only used it once – just before she went up on the platform where she had been picked by Liam – but she...
2023-09-10 09:09:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 5, Chapter 1
22nd Day, Middle Fire Month, 1 CE
“There! There he is, sister!”
A cry of warning sounded beside Remedios Custodio. She frowned at the man frantically shaking her by the vambrace.
“W...
2023-09-08 11:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 13
“We’re not going to make it in time.”
“Carlos did offer to ride ahead and tie them up.”
There was a reason for Lugo to refuse that offer, though he wouldn’t give voice to it. Simply put, the ranchers were already a...
2023-09-06 13:08:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 12
A chilly gust from the sea swept over the infantry column, sending locks of Lugo Agrela’s hair over his face. He brushed them aside with his fingers, focusing his gaze on the coast. Road conditions remained poor since the storm and a ceiling of ...
2023-09-04 15:08:59 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 11
After staying overnight with the Martinez family, Neia and Saye sailed out of Lloyds on a fishing boat belonging to another member of the Corps. They were dropped off at the nearest village to the east, from where they slogged their way through th...
2023-09-02 17:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 10
It turned out that Neia wasn’t very good at punching people. In her panic, her fist missed the man’s face entirely and hit him in the shoulder. The man staggered back several steps in a half-spin before bumping into the wall and losing his foo...
2023-08-31 19:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 9
Though Lloyds was one of the smallest cities in the Holy Kingdom – its current population was around ten thousand, excluding the new labour camps – it was still a city and Neia struggled to figure out what was going on and who to speak with. E...
2023-08-29 21:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 8
“Here come some more…”
On the road to Lloyds, Neia and Saye munched on a breakfast of freshly-picked forest berries as they watched a man and woman walk toward them from the east. They wore working garb and carried little more than the...
2023-08-27 23:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 7
After seeing Mister Moro off, Neia made sure the ranchers who had arrived fresh from Hacienda Santiago were aware of their responsibilities as they escorted supplies from the port back to their home. News of the conscription order had by then beco...
2023-08-26 01:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 6
“How were things in town, Mister Moro?”
“A mountain of gossip and speculation has arisen in the wake of our arrival, Miss Baraja. As far as how things have gone since the transfer of Lloyds to the royalists, the people here have alread...
2023-08-24 03:08:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 5
They spent another day visiting people around the city while preparations were made for the journey to Lloyds Prefecture. That extra day in the city saved them several days’ worth of time, however, as their return to the east would consist of a ...
2023-08-22 05:08:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Paladin of the Holy Kingdom, Part III: Act 4, Chapter 4
“Seven out of ten. You’re as good as I am, Mrs Vos!”
The woman, a plump fishwife by the name of Carmen Vos, beamed at Neia’s praise.
“Oh, you’re such a flatterer, Miss Baraja,” she laughed lightly. “You never missed dur...
2023-08-20 07:08:01 +0000 UTC View Post