This is a story idea that I've been tossing around in my head for about a year now, and watching the Witcher series on Netflix inspired me to write it out. I'm not certain if this will become a fully-fledged story, but if there's an overwhelming d...
2019-12-28 23:39:42 +0000 UTC View Post
Let me know how you feel about the fight scene. I’m a little iffy on it, but I can’t tell if its me being overly critical or if it needs some work.
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The minotaur hit me like a linebacker, nearly folding me in ...
2019-12-28 16:08:53 +0000 UTC View Post
Jericho
Level: 1
Progress to level 2: 197,804/1,000,000
Strength: 60
Endurance: 73
Dexterity 2019-12-28 16:08:50 +0000 UTC View Post
I really wish I had a mirror, I reflected as I fiddled with my rolled-up sleeves. I had a good idea of how I looked thanks to the ones at the Guildhall, but walking through a city of sweaty, filthy peasants tended to leave small detai...
2019-12-28 16:08:48 +0000 UTC View Post
Trama is something that is purely subjective. What could traumatize person A could leave person B completely unaffected -- there was no person in this galaxy that had the same exact values, fears, expectations, and desires. Despite th...
2019-12-26 16:22:38 +0000 UTC View Post
The cities of Cadinth were dead. There was once an ancient race that had lived here, but they were gone long before other races had settled in their ruins. The buildings, despite how poorly they aged over thousands of years, they stil...
2019-12-26 16:22:28 +0000 UTC View Post
“My master and I were meeting up with a contact in the Empire -- apparently my master saved the life of a general in the Empire, and when he learned of what the Empire had planned, he reached out to master Okkur. He...was discovered...
2019-12-26 16:22:20 +0000 UTC View Post
To avoid any confusion for when you see the word elephant -- it’s a placeholder so I can easily find and replace it with another word. There’s going to be a poll later to determine the name of Tarble’s new attack, so vote for yo...
2019-12-23 16:01:18 +0000 UTC View Post
"I agree wholeheartedly, Lord Frieza!" Captain Ginyu exclaimed, but his voice was distant even as it rang out in my ear. I couldn't tear my eyes away from the awe-inspiring display of power. Planet Sereall drifted apart, neatly cut in...
2019-12-23 16:01:13 +0000 UTC View Post
Jericho
Level: 1
Progress to level 2: 197,804/1,000,000
Strength: 60
Endurance: 73
Dexterity 2019-12-21 15:59:26 +0000 UTC View Post
I really wish I had a mirror, I reflected as I fiddled with my rolled-up sleeves. I had a good idea of how I looked thanks to the ones at the Guildhall, but walking through a city of sweaty, filthy peasants tended to leave small detai...
2019-12-21 15:59:21 +0000 UTC View Post
So, I’ve noticed some serious problems with the pacing of this story. When I was plotting out my outline and writing the backlog of chapters, I didn’t really notice it at the time, but it’s become pretty clear that the plot of t...
2019-12-21 15:59:14 +0000 UTC View Post
The cities of Cadinth were dead. There was once an ancient race that had lived here, but they were gone long before other races had settled in their ruins. The buildings, despite how poorly they aged over thousands of years, they stil...
2019-12-19 16:05:58 +0000 UTC View Post
“My master and I were meeting up with a contact in the Empire -- apparently my master saved the life of a general in the Empire, and when he learned of what the Empire had planned, he reached out to master Okkur. He...was discovered...
2019-12-19 16:05:53 +0000 UTC View Post
People have more than five senses. Sight, hearing, taste, touch, and smell -- those made up most of them, but there were other senses. Not stuff like a sense of time, sense of self and so on, but a nearly tangible sense used to observ...
2019-12-19 16:05:47 +0000 UTC View PostThis is a new story I've been working on for some time, and now that I have a nice backlog of chapters, with the upcoming trainwreck of the Rise of Skywalker just around the corner, this seems as good of a time as any to post this.
Upd...
2019-12-17 19:07:16 +0000 UTC View Post
“Rahhhhh!” I screamed, launching the ball of purple ki at the Green Lantern. The Lantern glowed with a deep green light, its jaw clenched as it raised a fist, the deep green ring on its finger glowing as a construct emerged from i...
2019-12-16 16:02:21 +0000 UTC View Post
To avoid any confusion for when you see the word elephant -- it’s a placeholder so I can easily find and replace it with another word. There’s going to be a poll later to determine the name of Tarble’s new attack, so either leav...
2019-12-16 16:02:16 +0000 UTC View Post
I grew up with the Teen Titans show, and back then I had the biggest crush on Raven. And you know what? I still do.
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Raven heard Tarble’s presence a moment before he touched down on the top of Titan Tower, landi...
2019-12-15 16:03:42 +0000 UTC View Post
“Lili, you feeling okay?” I asked, spotting the smaller girl as I walked up to the central plaza, the dark sky hanging overhead. Even in the low light, the moment Lili turned to look at me, I saw something was wrong. She looked ab...
2019-12-14 16:01:49 +0000 UTC View PostSo, I’ve noticed some serious problems with the pacing of this story. When I was plotting out my outline and writing the backlog of chapters, I didn’t really notice it at the time, but it’s become pretty clear that the plot of this story is ...
2019-12-14 16:01:32 +0000 UTC View Post
“Rahhhhh!” I screamed, launching the ball of purple ki at the Green Lantern. The Lantern glowed with a deep green light, its jaw clenched as it raised a fist, the deep green ring on its finger glowing as a construct emerged from i...
2019-12-09 16:02:08 +0000 UTC View Post
“Stay small,” I told my body, fighting against the transformation that tried to overtake me as I stared up at the Power Ball. My teeth grew, sharpening into fangs as I grit them hard enough they could shatter, a vein bulging out n...
2019-12-09 16:01:47 +0000 UTC View Post
“Lili, you feeling okay?” I asked, spotting the smaller girl as I walked up to the central plaza, the dark sky hanging overhead. Even in the low light, the moment Lili turned to look at me, I saw something was wrong. She looked ab...
2019-12-07 16:00:54 +0000 UTC View Post
The next few days were...normal. Extremely normal. Things seemed to fall into a routine of sorts. I got up, went into the Dungeon with Lili for around ten hours or so, then Eina would give me lessons. Apparently, she figured since I a...
2019-12-07 16:00:26 +0000 UTC View Post
A short set up chapter. Things really kick off next chapter.
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“What’s the big deal?” Bardock asked, leaning in his chair far enough that I’m sure he was hovering to stop himself from falling over. His arms...
2019-12-02 16:05:19 +0000 UTC View Post