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So, I've finished addressing all the comments and suggestions currently in the google docs. Thank you all for the help, as the story is now much stronger, I think, than it was. Especially big thank you to Mark, Ad...
2022-09-17 19:45:40 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
And there it goes, the final five chapters reworked some and ready for y'all's comments! Thank you yet again for the feedback and support, helping make me a better author. Please do your best to get through it in a week...
2022-09-11 21:04:34 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Just finished up to chapter 30 of draft 2, so y'all get the post a day early. Thanks for y'all's help and thoughts!
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See attached for the cover to Legacy of the M'Zee!
2022-09-08 03:47:57 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Well, I accidentally deleted this, so here's draft 1 chapter 21 again!
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The doorway warped as soon as I stepped into it, depositing me in a hemispherical chamber five meters in diameter....
2022-09-05 04:01:27 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
I'm now up to chapter 15 on my second pass through, and ready to share with y'all! Of note, I updated the fight with the Manticore, the underwater history lesson, and a bit about the clearing with the berries. Let me kn...
2022-09-05 03:58:26 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
And that's all folks. Draft 1 done. Still a lot to fix, and I'm going to try to power through it over the next two weeks. If I'm not done by the 11th, I'll probably take vacation from the day job to finish up.
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There’s a ton of feedback, and I’m loving it! Hopefully it’ll turn this book and every subsequent one into a better product. Thanks for y’all’s support!
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The next room was t...
2022-08-29 04:50:50 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Thanks for all the feedback y'all've given throughout the writing of this story!
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I moved my way through the Eight-by-Eight, layering on top the Dual Runic Spiral Technique that I’d de...
2022-08-27 22:54:01 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
So, I just finished chapter 35, and wrote To Be Continued on it. I'm not sure on the ending, but it felt like a good spot to stop. Expect the next few chapters to come fast. I do have a few bits to go back and add, and ...
2022-08-26 16:14:24 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Sorry about the late post! I got distracted by making the paperback version of Monster Island, then went out to a brewery to write. I did finish chapter 34 though, and it's looking like chapter 35 or 36 will be the end ...
2022-08-23 03:20:13 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Not a whole lot of writing done. Editing the final version of Energy Barons now. I hope to have it done by next Sunday, then I'll publish it! Thanks for all y'all's support!
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I found mys...
2022-08-08 02:58:13 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Not a whole lot of writing this week. We went camping in Cheyenne to go to Cheyenne Frontier Days. Long drive there and back, longest we've done with the kids ever. Was hoping to get writing done while camping. That did...
2022-08-01 03:29:41 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
So, we're done with platforming. Hope you enjoyed this one!
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This pillar was different. Rather than a circle, it had a long oval top. A dense thicket of trees made a straight line across...
2022-07-25 02:41:07 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
After this, I only have 2 chapters in the backlog. I'm working on more, now that I've finished draft 3 of Energy Barons and sent it off to my editor!
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“Totally jinxed myself,” ...
2022-07-18 02:46:44 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Thanks for all y'all's help in liking/commenting on Facebook posts. I got selected for the next part of the beta, so keep on going over and clicking things if you can. It's not a ton of money, but it can hopefully becom...
2022-07-11 03:06:23 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Not a whole lot of work done this week. Spent a lot of time with the family and relaxing. Going to write a bunch tomorrow, though, and keep pushing forward on Legacy. Please have as much of your edits/thoughts/comments ...
2022-07-04 02:23:27 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
I've gotten a bit more writing done, so y'all get to have a chapter today too!
Thanks for all y'all's support!
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Five minutes after learning the Dalila Aether Control Method, I was ...
2022-06-20 02:47:40 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Happy Father's Day!
Well, this is how far I got this week. Not quite as much as I wanted, but good enough. Thanks for the help and enjoy!
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I got a new iPad stand and keyboard that is working better, and I got a bunch of writing on Legacy, so y'all get another chapter! Please see the previous post today for the second draft of Energy Barons, so y'all can ma...
2022-06-13 02:52:03 +0000 UTC View PostI've looked over and made some basic edits to the first fourteen chapters of Energy Barons! You'll be able to look over and make comments on the current draft at
Woot woot!
Reminder to go to Facebook so you can like/comment on posts please! Help me expand my reach!
2022-06-07 03:25:30 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
I ordered the cover for Energy Barons, and y'all will get to see it first! It's almost done, just waiting on one change.
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My steps squished as I found myself on the shores of a sma...
2022-06-06 03:38:59 +0000 UTC View PostSo, now that you’ve all read the whole thing, what do you think? What worked, what didn’t, feedback and thoughts? I’ll be starting on the second draft soon. If you spotted typos, I’ll be pulling up each chapter’s page and checking the co...
2022-06-05 02:34:02 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR’S NOTE ***
And here we have it, the final chapter in the book! Ends with To Be Continued, as they still have quite a ways to go to finish driving the Daemons off of Earth.
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“NO!” the Daem...
2022-06-04 03:39:57 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR’S NOTE ***
Post 2 today
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“They downgraded what they are upgrading the portal into, but that means they can finish faster,” David said to a hurriedly called senior leadership meeting. “I d...
2022-06-03 02:34:49 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR’S NOTE ***
We’re camping this weekend, so I’m making due with the Patreon App. It’s not the best.
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David grinned at Colin, then dropped into his core cave. His mental projection moved to...
2022-06-03 02:33:04 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
And one more!
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“Foolish primates,” a massive Daemon called out as it stood behind the first row. David threw a Scholar’s Vision at it, straining slightly at the distance.
Nam...
2022-06-02 03:29:00 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
Enjoy!
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Two hours later, Aly jogged out of the trees. “We’ve only got about fifty meters left,” she said. “The Daemons have rebuilt their barricades across the river. They’re s...
2022-06-02 03:27:33 +0000 UTC View Post*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
So, the rest of the chapters will be put up over the rest of the week, and I'll have an overall comment post up on Saturday. I'm going to be focusing on Legacy of the M'Zee for this week and part of next, to let y'all h...
2022-06-01 03:19:59 +0000 UTC View Post